The boy you trained, gone he is, consumed by Darth Vader

這句的文法對不對????????

你呢句好似shakespeare  
不過如果係ge話我會寫 'the boy you trained is gone, consumed by Darth Vader'.

係star war裡的一句對白。
應該係個綠色老Jedi講的(Yoda)。
佢講D英文，講就明，寫就唔係咁好啦。
你最好都係唔好學佢咁。一定會被人話你。