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Leave me alone (改編自G.E.M.-等一個他) By Vincci Chui
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Leave me alone (改編自G.E.M.-等一個他) By Vincci Chui
是次第一次改詞
改得唔好,唔好鬧我
其實我得13歲
希望大家比d comment
等我有改進嘅空間,,THX!!
by Vincci
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Why don’t you listen to me?
For a while ,a second and you will understand
Are these all only your bias?
I don’t know ,whatever you don’t listen
So I determined not to love you because our love have already stopped
Can you now leave me alone Get out right now
Why don’t you leave me alone No more excuse
I want to stay in a hole Let me calm down
Think a lot Everything all about you
Love you yesterday
Because of hurting me I don’t care you
I really want to forget you
But I can’t. At bedtime keep waiting for your call
I have never lose my mind like this
Not to keep this situation longer
Can you now leave me alone
from my mind
Why don’t you leave me alone and disappear
I want to being alone not to see someone
Not to think anymore Can I be that?
Many days and years have passed But I still bleeding all the time
No one help me to cure listen to me
(I can help you)Really help me?
(Share with you)Shall I change it?
(Can you give a chance?)A new start right here.
I stepped in trouble this time again I wanna give and leave this time
Can you now leave me alone Get out right now
Why don’t you leave me alone No more excuse
I want to stay in a hole Let me calm down
Think a lot Everything all about you
Can you now leave me alone Get out right now
Why don’t you leave me alone No more excuse
I want to stay in a hole Let me calm down
Think a lot Everything all about you
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唔錯唔錯..
努力=)
哈...可以更呷一點韻..
不過..首詞個意思唔錯呀
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