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ThirtyDays{三十日 英文版}@改詞from me

ThirtyDays{三十日 英文版}@改詞from me

【原曲名稱】:三十日
【原曲作曲】:側田
【原曲填詞】:方傑
【新詞名稱】:THIRTY DAYS
【改編填詞】:leaoardo
【改編語言】:English


小弟改左小小詞做英文版
比小小意見
第一次錄改編歌


Thirty days and thirty nights i wait
Counting down the day so far away
When I'm feeling so alone
I'd just hear you on the phone
Wanna speak but nothing comes my way

Baby hear me now, you make me so proud
I wanna tell you girl, and tell the world, the whole my world
I'll always love you and miss you in thirty day"
For I have nothing left to be here on this earth today
All because of you I feel, is all because of you I will
I love you, more than words can ever say
I'll give my life to be near you in every way
For I have nothing left to be here on this earth today

All because of you I feel
All because of you
I'll just sing my little song for you

every days and more nights than i wait
Counting down the day so far away
When I'm feeling so alone
I'd just hear you on my song
Wanna speak but nothing comes my way

Baby hear me now, you make me so sad
I wanna tell you girl, and tell the world, the whole my world
I'll give my life to be near you in every way
For I have nothing left to be here on this earth today
All because of you I feel, is all because of you I will
I love you, more than words can ever say
I'll spend my life here beside you in every way
For I have nothing left to be here on this earth today

All because of you I feel
All because with you
I'll just sing my little song for you

Sing my little song for you

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All because of you I feel
All because with you
I'll just sing my little song for you

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